Kit O'Connell
"King of the Goats"
Funeral (2nd draft) 
24th-Mar-2008 02:02 am
pbf07, framed

I finished the second draft of my short story, “Funeral” tonight. I think that I’ve fixed many of the issues Reesa pointed out to me in the previous draft and made the story stronger as a result. I’ve posted it to my writing group and printed out copies for Reesa & Steve to pour over with their Pens of Doom ™.

Funeral, second draft
Microsoft Word wordcount: 1,463 words
Manuscript wordcount: 1,500 words

It took a while to get to this stage; for whatever reason I had to sit on this story for a while before it could be revised. I’m glad I trusted the process and I’m glad to have made it to this stage. Hopefully the story can be sent out soon.

Originally published at approximately 8,000 words. You can comment here or there.

Comments 
24th-Mar-2008 01:30 pm (UTC) - yay!
love to have a look at it next week, when i no longer feel teh suck... *squee*
24th-Mar-2008 08:32 pm (UTC) - Re: yay!
I'll have revised it again... hoping to do a third draft tonight.
25th-Mar-2008 08:49 pm (UTC) - Re: yay!
fine. third draft it is!
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